Relay-Version: version B 2.10 5/3/83; site utzoo.UUCP Posting-Version: version B 2.10.2 9/18/84; site ucla-cs.ARPA Path: utzoo!linus!decvax!tektronix!hplabs!sdcrdcf!trwrb!trwrba!cepu!ucla-cs!reiher From: reiher@ucla-cs.UUCP Newsgroups: net.movies Subject: long reviews Message-ID: <6365@ucla-cs.ARPA> Date: Fri, 19-Jul-85 02:35:40 EDT Article-I.D.: ucla-cs.6365 Posted: Fri Jul 19 02:35:40 1985 Date-Received: Tue, 23-Jul-85 05:20:01 EDT Organization: UCLA Computer Science Department Lines: 29 Things having quieted down a little, mail-wise, I will briefly report the results of my question about the lengths of my reviews (and then, not so briefly but in a separate article, describe a little about my philosophy of movie reviews). Using purely arbitrary divisions, and some guesswork on how to classify certain responses, and with the caveat that I may well have dropped some messages on the floor accidentally, here are the results. Fine at this length: 19 A little too long (keep it around 100 lines): 4 Too long (keep it to 2 screensful): 6 Much too long (all I want is how many stars you give it): 1 I am suspicious of these numbers, as I remember a lot more replies saying that the reviews were too long. Either I'm overly sensitive to criticism (definitely true, but maybe not the explanation), or I subconsciously sent the negative messages to the bit bucket. At any rate, as far as the feedback's result goes, I think that I will try to make a concious effort to put a 100 line limit on reviews of a single movie. Once in a while, I review more than one movie in a posting, and those will probably run longer. Editing is one of the writing skills everyone should practice, and I'll try to improve mine. Also, I will be saving myself from Chuqui's proposed article guillotine. Thanks to all who responded. Due to the volume, I didn't have time to answer you individually, but some of the specific questions and criticisms you raised will be addressed in an upcoming posting. -- Peter Reiher reiher@LOCUS.UCLA.EDU {...ihnp4,ucbvax,sdcrdcf}!ucla-cs!reiher