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From: phil@isieng.UUCP (Phil Gustafson)
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Subject: Re: Adjectives, sentence structure, etc.
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Date: Wed, 22-Jan-86 21:09:07 EST
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Posted: Wed Jan 22 21:09:07 1986
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>From: Lynn Gold <Lynn%PANDA@SUMEX-AIM.ARPA>
>Rather than tell you why you *should* use less adjectives and more
>verbs, let me show you an example:        ^^^^
                                          say 'fewer'

Your point is fine, but the incorrect word choice makes it a lot less
convincing.

	phil