Relay-Version: version B 2.10 5/3/83; site utzoo.UUCP Path: utzoo!mnetor!seismo!lll-lcc!pyramid!hplabs!hplabsc!taylor From: Boebert@MIT-Multics.ARPA Newsgroups: comp.society Subject: written vs. oral Message-ID: <1974@hplabsc.HP.COM> Date: Mon, 8-Jun-87 20:49:20 EDT Article-I.D.: hplabsc.1974 Posted: Mon Jun 8 20:49:20 1987 Date-Received: Thu, 11-Jun-87 06:07:26 EDT Sender: taylor@hplabsc.HP.COM Distribution: world Lines: 15 Approved: taylor@hplabs There exists an interesting counterexample to the notion that written communication is a subset, approximation, or description of oral expression. The counterexample (this may be too strong a term) is the dialog written by the celebrated "hard-boiled" author James. M. Cain. When scanned by eye on the page it fairly crackles with tension; when read aloud it is flat as a pancake. This phenomenon was first noted by Raymond Chandler (no mean writer of dialog himself) in his comments on the difficulty of converting _Double Indemnity_ into a screenplay. I noted a similar thing when I attended the opera that was made from _The Postman Always Rings Twice_. You can experience the same phenomenon from the other direction if you sit down and read the screenplay from some movie that you thought had terrific dialog (in my case, _The Hustler_); it seems totally banal on the page. The very notion of rhythm, as well as the emotional nuance conveyed by that rhythm, seem to be different for for eye and ear.